I
am writing a peer letter to the editor on Kijani's editorial. I
agree with everything in his thesis statement, I think that doing
extracurricular activities help you get along well with others and
that it opens the door of your success. That is also helps you
emotionally, socially and academically. These are summing up what
extracurricular s can do for you as a whole.
Heath I fully agree that it promotes good self esteem and helps get
you into shape. Though that depends on what type of extracurricular
it is. It could be sports related or maybe something like dance or
the drama and arts department. Or maybe its band. There may be things
going on in there life and may be they think that that activity is
the only thing that they have that they really enjoy and are truly
passionate about. Its not something that they should be forced to do
but something that they love to do. If a parent wanted their child to
join the chess club. And the child wanted to join the basketball
team. The child would more than likely not do well in the chess club
since that’s not where their passion was. The statement quoted “an
idle mind is the devils workshop” is similar to”idle hands is
the devils playground”Basically meaning that if your bored is when
you are likely to get onto the most trouble. So extracurricular
activities are very important it gives you something else to do other
than homework and studying and I'm all for that. When you have
something to do that’s productive that you don't like then get
something that’s productive that you do like and that's good for
you.
Another reason extracurricular are good programs to get into is that
they look very good on your college resume. So when employers look at
them they can see all of the credentials that you have.
There is another key factor about the importance of extracurricular
's is that you have to be a very patient person. If you don't have
patience then you will have to find some along the way. There is a
lot of team bonding that is involved with extracurricular activities.
And in order to do well in the work place you need to have good work
ethics and that involves having patience.”Patience is not the
ability to wait, but the ability to keep a good attitude while
waiting”(Keene) Most jobs in life require patience and its more of
a “bare necessity” in life. Patience also ties right in with
teamwork if you don’t have patience then teamwork is literally
impossible. “If everyone is moving forward together then success
takes care of itself” (Henry Ford) See if if everyone is moving
forward together which is the key word everyone on the team may not
be good at the sport or playing the instrument but that’s where
patience comes into the picture. So in conclusion there is a lot of
reasons that extracurricular's help you in whether it be sports chess
or band. The help you become a well rounded individual which is a
good thing to aspire to be in life.It helps relieve some stress that
may have been on you and it gives you a very special way to express
yourself in a very different and unique way.
Sincerely,
-M
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